Top - Diminishings for a sense of distance - Nice.
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Hydrant - I see no pencil lines as preliminaries to get the proportions right. Good ink eye!
Bottom - My favorite; good placement with an interesting, left sided sky-piece; great stony effect; love the container plants peeking over the railing; I very much would like to see this one with some color; stones are such wonderful hues--blues, blue-greens, ochres, tans. Try a colored sketch. If you are afraid to ruin a good drawing, do a throw-away and add some kids watercolors. Claudia would be proud.
Other things. Someone went to Brown Deer Park?!
Top - Diminishings for a sense of distance - Nice.
ReplyDeleteNext -Tones through proximity of lines. Difficult.
Hydrant - I see no pencil lines as preliminaries to get the proportions right. Good ink eye!
Bottom - My favorite; good placement with an interesting, left sided sky-piece; great stony effect; love the container plants peeking over the railing; I very much would like to see this one with some color; stones are such wonderful hues--blues, blue-greens, ochres, tans. Try a colored sketch. If you are afraid to ruin a good drawing, do a throw-away and add some kids watercolors. Claudia would be proud.